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Frozen Petals      [GP5]   [712 hits]   [Version: 1]   [Id: 104088]
Artist: Competition Nov/Dec 2007
File Size: 107.9 KB     Number of Tracks: 12
Submitted by: Beckkill  (All tabs)  on 05 Dec 2007 17:27, commenting:
Plan B...
I got inspired to write this song when i came across some pictures of Siberia. The frozen, barren and timeless landscape really got to me.
-no RSE please-

Validated by E.T.H on 06 Dec 2007 14:12


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it's easy to assume that the first parts of the song (Intro, Band Enters) are brilliant... solid sound
damn professional pre-verse and verses....and that's what I like bout your music

well, the break and bridge/verse 2 kind of really got some spice from Forest of Tranquility
I just loved the Re-Intro and it's free accentuations stuff...I sure like parts like that ; )
the Pre-Verse grooves are just SWEET!....enjoyable as....well....many things
the Guitar solo has this kind of ultratumb sounding....I loved it
the outro with guitar solo is NICE....nice work with drums there ; )

well...gonna give you a 4,5 (just because I shouldn't give no 5 stars 'til all the entries are here)

solid song, man

Posted by stockle  {{ 15 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 06 Dec 2007 20:10

Rated as: Unrated
Really nice song dude, loved all the effects... dam even if i try it i couldn't do all the effects you did
pretty well executed piece, nice atmosphere too
all the instruments stayed unique, and doing separate things... not boring at all

nice drum track too, i'll give you credits for your originality

the only thing i didn't liked to much is that there is no definite melody... its all ramdomized

but oh well... nice piece of art

i'll give you 4 stars

Posted by Valgerd  {{ 22 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 06 Dec 2007 20:55

Rated as: 
splendid piece, wonderful harmony, powerful creepiness, just a remarkable achievment, young fella... the solo is nice, but it could have been better (sorry - you're a great composer, so you've got the bar way higher than the main pack)...

also, I've finally named that little thing that scratched my thoughts and made me uneasy with your music, but because I couldn't really describe it in words, I omitted it from my reviews... namely, you seem detached from your work. sure, it's perfectly written, but it feels a little like the work of some android. try to add some YOU into the mix and see what comes out...? ;]

still, you get a 4.5, and you're in the running for my 5

Posted by RumpyTheRubbuhChikin  {{ 30 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 08 Dec 2007 01:53

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The song has a very special mood, which was awesome, but it can feel tiresome aswell, mainly because the inner tempo is so friggin low :) But it's addictive and interesting and original, so good job. The thing you might consider is to have that part that just stands out from all the others, because this mood really wore me down in the end, and it might feel repetitive. Awesomely composed as always though, but it did feel like you kinda had only one idea and sticked to it all the way through. I've seen you do better than this ;)

Still, can't be lower than 4

Posted by Shade Of Blue  {{ 15 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 24 Dec 2007 04:40

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I usually like your songs but this one is not for me. IMO it's discordant and unstructured; it doesn't seem to have a story. Sorry, but I didn't like it although I can see you spent a lot of time on it as the notation is good, interesting key signatures, decent percussion and keys, and some interesting guitar fills.

Posted by blackiel  {{ 0 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 06 Jan 2008 17:15

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 Technically is out of my scope. Wonderful soun and effects, but as much I have listened to it the less I understand it. I'm sorry but I feel like I do with those classical compositors that are genius but I can't stand them. A frozen song I would say.

Posted by Lonemower  {{ 2 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 07 Jan 2008 06:51

Rated as: Unrated
 I love the effects and stuff used all of the song, makes it that much better.
Wouldn't really be the kind of song I'd rush home to listen to, but it's the kind that i'd just have in a background haha (thats a good thing).
When the guitars start comin in after the re-intro is my fav part, goes from a slow eerie feeling to an intense eerie feeling hah
I'm not big on tons of time sig changes, i like to keep it simple lol...but you make it look easy and its horrible when people try and fail lol
Not much else to say, the music was very well written and deserves a 4 imo.

Posted by -Sidewinder-  {{ 1 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 07 Jan 2008 18:55

Rated as: Unrated
 Superb intro with a nice bass line. The feeling is well rendered (Cold as it can get )

The refinements and accents are really good!

Introduction of the band is extremely well conducted and piano line is really good again the feeling is intense (thumbs up)

Re-exposition of the piano is really well advised (at the right moment)

Bar 33 why a Break and a bridge? You've done the same thing.

Re-intro is incredible and done really fast. (Cheers!)

bar 113 to 123 Timpani and other percussions would have render rhythm severity way better than drums...after that you re-enter the drums.

Congrats! I really liked your work!

4 1/2 stars!

Posted by Nelson_Bougui  {{ 0 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 07 Jan 2008 22:34

Rated as: Unrated
 - Excellent intro.
- All parts fit well in the premise.
- Bars 35-42 are a bit out of place. Using the rest of the instruments would have presented your point much better.
- Mood is carried well.
- Intro into the solo is well-executed.
- Interesting fills.
- You never let go of the listener’s attention, all the way through to the powerful final bars.

Posted by E.T.H  {{ 16 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 11 Jan 2008 16:10

Rated as: 
 Really nice work!

It's fair to say that you did a pretty respecful use of music language in this work 10/10

As far as we discuss about harmonic and melodic content within your work. I'd say that it was more a work on mood and tickiling ears with some nicely choosed dissonance than a strict chordal work. On the other hand melodies are made of fragments which is the rtight stuff for creating such moods and feel. It's the solo that made me lower your score because it really lacks the overall feel you gived to the whole piece maybe a good use of shorter values with again some harsh harmonic intervals during the solo to make it contrast against the display of power and agression driven by the band would have been more suited. Some speedy licks joining the band in a rhytmic unisson would have been again make it stand as a living part of your music. 8/10

Rhythms......well in my opinion you got a great sense of dramatic use of it and all parts and instrument you use to create your sonic visions and you make the bass feel like it should.. In my personal opinion you are one of the best drum writers i have the chance to look at some scores around internet. You have the ftouch and knowledge of making them feel real on a staff and if it has to be played by a computer or a professional drummer the result will be as good. I'm sure :) 10/10

I beleive that this music with some tweaking could find it's place somewhere in a movie, a videogame or simply on a CD.

On a personal note i appreciated this from beginning to the end even if i had some bad toughts about the solo. I also thing that some of Nelson's comment about introducing some percussions at sweet spots would dramatically improve the powewr and impressions some parts are giving to the listener.

I want to give you alittle hint about GP that you may know but are not using. Octave display 8va and stuff. It gets pretty hard to read music more than 4 lines above or below the staff and you should use it in order to suit the eyes of music readers so they can easily grasp your ideas when looking at your scores.:)

2 thumbs up
4.5 Stars!

Posted by M@ngOr€  {{ 53 tabs / 12 corrections }}  on: 19 Jan 2008 16:56

Rated as: 
Great work. slow intro but progressive.

Posted by jasontherigger  {{ 2 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 11 Apr 2008 16:10

Rated as: Unrated
Great work. Slow intro but progressive. I really like the piano parts though. Great composition through and through.

Posted by jasontherigger  {{ 2 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 11 Apr 2008 16:11

Rated as: Unrated
I loved it, you nailed the theme you were going for. Great song.

Posted by daniel9388  {{ 33 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 06 Jul 2008 05:29

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I can tell you put a lot of work into this song. The atmosphere is the intro is great, not overly technical or pretentious and it does the job.

I really like the general atmosphere of this song, but I have to say I started losing interest around the solo.

Still, 4 stars. Good song.

Posted by Ktb  {{ 12 tabs / 0 corrections }}  on: 02 Aug 2008 18:41

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