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I like the intro. Pretty chilling mood. I like the effects in track 6. Nothing to complain about this part.
I think the transition into the verse could have been a bit smoother. I doesn´t come out of a sudden, but the connection could be improved.
Verse per se is nice again. Again I like the lead guitar very much. It underlines the atmosphere very well.
Chorus is very cool. The best part till now, though the transition to the next verse lacks work again.
Repeating Verse - Chorus in this short time is not too good. Your hurry in composing gets kinda obvious in these bars.
Your tappings in the 2nd Chorus need some work as well.
Bridges are okay. Nothing special, but not bad either. But you ended this part nicely. Same goes for the next parts.
Soooo, your song starts very solid and it could be much better than it is now. The quality decreases a lot when going forward in your song. Sadly, because there is much potential.
Posted by Donkey of Steel {{ 4 tabs / 0 corrections }} on: 12 Nov 2009 05:24
Rated as: Unrated